Hello all who is reading this,
The reason I have created an account here at Deviantart.com, is due to my very persistant friends. I have been writeing poems for a long time; but never kept them. As soon as I'd write them I'd throw them away. I never really thought much of my own work untill a group of my friends took my poem book and read them...soon I was being harrassed for not keeping them and publishing any of them. Which I think is quite dumb...I feel all my poems seem...Uneven, like there's something wrong with them, and I couldn't put my finger on it. Most of them are written when I have mood swings, so half of it would be about something sad...and the ending about anger.

Now I have begun posting up some of my poems and if you do get a chance to read them, I would love critism, even if you think they're bad, I want what you think of them. Please don't sugercoat your responses, thanks

~Dozer~